Sunday, January 15, 2017


As I wake up with a massive headache and the feeling of something stabbing me in my back from the uncomfortable mattress. I stood up barely able to catch my balance almost falling over, scratching my head pacing back and forth trying to remember what the hell happen to me. As I walk around i feel somethings in my pocket. I reach in there to pull everything out one by one. The first thing I pull out is a casino chip from the Caesars Place. The first thing I knew was that I was in Las Vegas in a jail cell. The second thing I find in this pocket is a room key from the same place. I started to have flashbacks of me in a fancy suit walking down to the casino. At the blackjack table I couldn't stop winning. The Third thing I remember pulling out of my pocket was a wristband from a club, I now remember walking downtown with a group of my guys and us walking into the club. the bright neon sign and the loud music had drawn us in and I remember a lot of drinks being pasted around. As I sat in my cell I got to thinking to myself where the hell did the guys go? How did we get separated? The last two things in my pocket left an even bigger question mark on my head, I pulled out a pocket full of one dollar bills and a wedding ring. My mind was completely blown and I couldn't put my finger on last night at all.

4 comments:

  1. Your story is good but it could be better by you talking more about your night! How exactly did you get in jail, and what happened?

    ReplyDelete
  2. good idea starting but really did not get in into the reason you where there

    ReplyDelete
  3. I really enjoyed your story line. Also your use of imagery helped the story flowed

    ReplyDelete
  4. really interesting story just dont know how you got to jail

    ReplyDelete